This is something I wrote in another language... and well, here's the jist of the English version.

Sinful I am,
Never had the chance to hold your hand.
Sinful I am,
I was never graced with being your friend.

The sinful are punished,
Kept my heart in my throat.
The sinful are punished,
Hid all the things I wrote.

Sinful I am,
Kept that little love bird in her cage.
Sinful I am,
Never let her see the light of day.

The sinful are punished,
So now what will become of me?
The sinful are punished,
My love, no one will ever see.

Sinful I am,
Lost in my ways.
Sinful I am,
Cried and still do, the day you moved away.

I actually have to say that I liked this one. Nice job with the rhythm too, i didn't stop once.

I agree. you might want to post the other language version.

enh... I'll have to get around to 'translating' that into it's Roman version...

/bow

Great poem man, and one I can relate to. Wish mine were half as good as this one, would be nice to read it in the language it was written in though.

Here you are Da_Mullet

Ghunaghar hoon main,
Tera haat not pakar saka.
Ghunaghar hoon main,
Tera saat dosti na kar saka.

Ghunagharon ko meelte hai sazaa,
Dil ke batain rakhein khalak main.
Ghunagharon ko meelte hai sazaa,
Apne sochain, chup chupa kai.

Ghunaghar hoon main,
Yea pyar ki chidya kya thee?
Ghunaghar hoon main,
Oos nai to sooraj ka moo be nahan dekha.

Ghunagharon ko meelte hai sazaa,
Aab kya mera ho ga?
Ghunagharon ko meelte hai sazaa,
Koyee ab nahein dekha ga.

Ghunaghar hoon main,
Aapna app mai main goom raha.
Ghunaghar hoon main,
Aapna app mai main rhota raha.